Jared Pickett Poet Haiku

Random Thoughts *29* Double Rhyming Haiku

trembling, my bones.
My feet are numb, frozen toes.
temperatures low.

Back-up pilot lights,
my adrenaline ignites.
curing my frost-bite.


Jared Pickett
10/26/09
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Richard Pickett December 1, 2009 at 4:57 PM Good job Son...I see your on... I am trying every style now to see which I like...Nicely penned here Son, as always.....Dad

Sara Kendrick November 2, 2009 at 1:19 PM I am glad wouldn't want you to leave us. Keep writing. Sara

John Freeman October 26, 2009 at 6:31 PM Awesome double rhyme Haiku Jared, keep rolling on brother. Sincerely, moses

Carol Sunshine Brown October 26, 2009 at 4:14 PM It is a beautiful day to be reading such excellent poetry. Thank you for sharing yours today Jared. Outstanding.Love, Carol

Raul Moreno October 26, 2009 at 10:21 AM Ha, this one is good. Nice work Jared...Raul

Doris Culverhouse October 26, 2009 at 10:09 AM nice job! turn up the heat!!

Charmaine Chircop October 26, 2009 at 9:56 AM Poor guy..with a frost bite..i love the way you did this rhyming haiku,i will do one in the coming days,excellent .as always..Charma:)