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Random Thoughts34 Minute Poetry

(8,4,4,4--8,4,4,4--8,4,4,4)---------(aabb-ccdd--eeff) [Minute Poetry] Mommy Nature Today, I'd like to stay indoors. These thunder storms, electric rods, enhanced facade. Cold enough, see possible snow, biting winds blow. these ice capades, keep me at bay. A slushy mess, not quite freezing. I wake wheezing, with goose pimples, & hardened nipples. Jared Pickett 12/05/09 Asavvy1

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2009 10:32:00 AM

That is cold. Warm fire and hot chocolate is the cure. Keep the warm pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/7/2009 5:49:00 PM

Well is it catchy? your goose pimples and hardened nipples? good write Jared with lots of emotion as to the ugly weather pattern the tri state area has experienced over this past weekend... where have U been? blessings... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/6/2009 2:47:00 PM

Nice form and meter Jared, trying different things strengthens the poet in you. Keep up the good work...Raul

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/5/2009 6:10:00 PM

I posted a christmas poem

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/5/2009 4:23:00 PM

yes you do a fine job with a poem, keep it up, very enjoyable!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/5/2009 11:48:00 AM

Jsred you always have a way to create a picture of you..and you always bring a smile to my face,,im imagining you feeling cold, dress some woolen clothes..and keep yourself warm..On my little island its very cold too,and all im doing is statying indoors,drinking Hot chocolate and reading my friends:)..Great work here Asavvy--Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/5/2009 10:09:00 AM

Well done, Jared, but I'd be happy to trade some of this Florida weather for those goose pimples! You and your father are really posting some great work! Cudos! Love, carolyn