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The fact 
that 
today 
wont 
last 
foeva 
wont
change 
2mo,. 
Funmy 
how 
yesterdays
brightest 
moments, 
luk as 
dull as a
candle 
standin 
next to 
the 
sun... 
Ever
heard of 
da black 
shade of 
wite? 
Dnt say
never, 
coz 
ever's nt 
a 
constant, 
ya'l dnt 
get da 
concept .. 
Fire 
trucks 
are 
flamable,
like 
eminem 
said.. 
We al 
nid a 
hero, bt
who wil 
save the 
hero 
since 
nuthn 
lasts
4eva..? 
O mayb 
we jus 
say dat 
wen we
lose 
sumthn 
to 
soothe 
ourselves? 
Yet
often we 
lose 
ourselves 
askin 
stupid 
questions 
like wat 
if left is 
truly 
rite? N to
da truth 
our eyes 
go blind, 
that if u 
push
wit ur 
might 
then 
want cnt 
be done
suddenly 
mite....becum 
posible 
n ths is al
plausible.. 
I dreamt 
it while 
dreamin...
While 
othaz 
breathe 
wen 
they r nt 
living... 
6 bilion 
posible 
ways to 
live life, 
1
for each 
of us, im 
just 
waitin 4 
da day
that one 
of us do 
it rite.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/8/2024 12:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:46:00 AM
AWESOME POEM... LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 12:59:00 AM
Oscar, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/1/2012 11:03:00 AM
interesting write this, thanks for sharing it xx
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