Random Short Verse Rap

Embarrassed to talk, hates to walk, as white as chalk, wouldn't trade a burger for a million dollars. keeps his life limited to one dollar hollars. one day he had a hart attack, it sent chills down his back, but he didn't care. got out held his life in the air, for someone to take it. woke up and tried to bake it, it left him the night he got home. and his wife wrote a poem about everything she loved about him. and how she was proud of em. but now he gave up he's gone she knew something was wrong. forever, good luck on your future endevors...
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Flower Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 12:11 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Vincent. :)
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June 14, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Vincent, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Nance Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 3:23 PM
It does have a rap feel to it. Rap and poetry go hand and hand. Hope to see you excel in both areas.
Burda Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 6:17 PM
thank you
A  Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Vincent,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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