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Ramble 24

what to write, what to write i get so excited, have so much to say, in so many ways like i’m going to burst if i can’t get out a verse or maybe a rhyme or some lyrics in 4/4 time but the words in my head keep circling instead can’t find their way out frustrated, i want to shout “why won’t you, why can’t you, get off the fence and make some sense?” but i get to this point where all my thoughts disjoint and what i have written will probably stay in hidden on some paper or a file that maybe i’ll get back to in a while

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Date: 11/3/2021 7:57:00 PM
G'day Richard ... and here I was; thinking I'm the only one suffering from this rambling - good stuff Richard - Lindsay
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Richard Colbert
Date: 11/4/2021 4:13:00 AM
thanks Lindsey, Rich

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