Ramble

what language form's best
for non-material things
minds and ideas...
aren't just illusion
they're based on experience
and so a language...
repeats and reflects
on itself to the point that
illogic is clear...
in the confusion
that passes of what is now
this 'mine' that i steer...
blah blah blah....
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Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 3:53 PM
deep one, Sand blown. seems like a series of haiku syllable form!
Blown Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 4:24 PM
it started off as a comment on non materialism and then got out of hand : )
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