Raising Teens and Pre-Teens

A tempest rages deep within
A storm brews in my soul
Outside conflict seeping in
And stirring in my bowl

So many things that I expect
And never seem to gain
I try to stand back and reflect
But I'm clouded by the pain

A simple task that I request
Be done when I get home
Is crumpled up and trampled on
Then tossed before my throne

To me it's like a mockery
I'm talking to the wall
Why is it so hard to do
The things I ask you all

An hour a day is all you need
To get these things in line
An hour a day then you can play
And everything is fine

Cold and tired, I come home late
And not a thing has moved
No-one raised a finger here
To see if I'd approve

Why is it so much to ask
For help along the way
I know that all inside this house
Can hear the words I say

When e're I leave before the dawn
To toil in the sun
I hope that this might be the day
When all the chores are done

Maybe just an hour more
Is all the time they need
I give it then I come back home
To find they paid no heed

A tempest rages deep within
The confines of my soul
Thank God I have the poetry
To keep me in control


Rockman


Even though those days have passed, I still find that writing is the best way to vent 
feelings.
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Mister Roboto Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Yep yup Rock man. I got you on this one man! This one's on my favorites now and a seven rate. Too close to home bro. check out a cpl new kinda funny ones I posted. One's called "Jack Ace" . and the other is called " Not Sofa King Cool"
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May 6, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Thanks Randy, for describing my life so perfectly in this rhyme! Ellen <3
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May 5, 2011 at 3:29 PM
I can relate to you I have a 4 and 8 yr old both girls both just like me in their own ways can be very challenging and that is exactly why I write very nicely worded. cory
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May 3, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Thanks Randy, this sounds like a black powerful spell.. of no no"s.. i mean that in a funny ways.. I know exactly what your saying before all the rage starts to cook up... And yes... poetry sometimes can be your best friend to release them feelings... glad i stopped by to enjoy your poetry... take care.. soup mail... p.d.
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