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Raising Sun

Running hard into the early raising sun
                        A warm breeze lifts off the river
                      Heart and breath feeding each other
                          My soul sings to the morning
                      It is good to be alive – come join me







David Meade
11/17/2014
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Daisy Meadows

Date: 8/15/2023 10:57:00 PM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/2/2015 9:28:00 PM

G'day David... Morning is like the creation of a new beginning when you run towards the sun with natures chorus providing a gauntlet to make you believe that life is good. Thank you David - Lindsay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2015 2:15:00 PM

Ahh!!! Enjoyed reading your work..Poetry comes with the morning run…Sometimes mine comes with the rising sun out on the porch..Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/22/2015 10:31:00 PM

A7 for this great and joyful write. I love early morn walks but even more so moonlight midnight walks where the night sounds race thru my veins! Bravoooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!

Arlene Smith

Date: 12/10/2014 10:04:00 PM

You have captured the difference in being alive and feeling alive.. Beautiful Penn, David!... Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/30/2014 11:02:00 AM

David this is so exquisitely beautiful! This is how I felt as I watched the sun rise on the Caribbean Sea from Mountain Top on St. Thomas, US Virgin Islands! Thank you for articulating this in such a lovely way! Pandita

David Meade
Date: 12/10/2014 1:53:00 PM

Thank-you Pandita -- the morning is for peace and love -- I bet the sunrise was AWESOME!! May all your days be filled with early morning love! Your continued support brings joy to me. All the best.

Paul Schneiter

Date: 11/23/2014 7:05:00 AM

This poem eloquently captures the feeling I had in my morning jogging days. I especially like the line "My soul sings to the morning." You have penned a wonderful composition. Thank you!

David Meade
Date: 12/10/2014 1:57:00 PM

Thank-you Paul, hopefully you are still getting out in the mornings, I have definitely slowed but hopefully have a few more years of easy jogging!! Thank-you for your comment and time, I value them.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/20/2014 4:18:00 PM

Really like this David. Really, really like it.

David Meade
Date: 11/20/2014 9:13:00 PM

You must be an early morning type of guy -- from your passion, I can visualize you seizing each and every morning sunrise!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/20/2014 9:14:00 AM

Yes!!! David...that's how I feel when I watch the sun rising every morning when I go for my early walk. Silence all around...fresh air....beautiful. #7 // paul

David Meade
Date: 11/20/2014 9:15:00 PM

The sound of silence -- the stillness and fresh air, yes my friend it is a good time of day . . .

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/18/2014 12:51:00 PM

Yes it feels good to be alive..Life is beautiful!

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 2:53:00 PM

You your words have brighten my day! Your the best.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2014 4:05:00 PM

this is really NICE. I like how you changed rising to raising. As if WE will be the ones to make the sun go up! Very cool poem

David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:32:00 PM

You are the most observant reader -- I was wondering if anyone would notice -- you did!! Thanks Andrea, you make my day!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/17/2014 12:10:00 PM

A nice uplifting piece. Close to the one I am about to post after I make some more comments as i am so behind in commenting to all my soup friends. love phyl

David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:33:00 PM

Loved your poem today!! Life seems to get in the way of our writing!! All the best.