Raised Up

support me arms raised that I may float high above storms of present life forever be raised drifting atop clouds of love no more earthly strife
written October 8, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 10:52 AM
I can stand a few more years of "earthly strife" - my grandchildren are not ready to wave me goodbye yet.
Hankins Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 7:09 PM
None of us are, Caren. None of us are!
Sambourne Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Your ability, Milton, to write a variety of verse certainly impresses. Seldom do I venture beyond free verse. I enjoyed the ethereal freedom of your well written piece. Sincerest regards, Brian
Hankins Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 7:10 PM
Thank you so much, Brian. I really appreciate your comment.
Hawkins Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 10:18 PM
That sounds just perfect....
Hankins Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 8:36 AM
Shirley, thanks so much for your warm, affirmative comment.
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