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Raised Up

support me arms raised that I may float high above storms of present life forever be raised drifting atop clouds of love no more earthly strife written October 8, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/11/2021 10:52:00 AM

I can stand a few more years of "earthly strife" - my grandchildren are not ready to wave me goodbye yet.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2021 7:09:00 PM

None of us are, Caren. None of us are!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/9/2021 8:00:00 PM

Your ability, Milton, to write a variety of verse certainly impresses. Seldom do I venture beyond free verse. I enjoyed the ethereal freedom of your well written piece. Sincerest regards, Brian

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2021 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Brian. I really appreciate your comment.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/8/2021 10:18:00 PM

That sounds just perfect....

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/9/2021 8:36:00 AM

Shirley, thanks so much for your warm, affirmative comment.