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Rainy Summer Love

Under summer’s rain, we smiled in God’s showers. Aqueous, holy, droplets, baptized our warm bodies We, two, were satisfied, tall,sensual, love towers. Honesty, wholeness, integrity, nothing shoddy. ********** Decades disappeared like a surpise, summer storm. Look deep in my eyes, for you, they are eternally starry. Reaching across the bed, sensual you, now all gone. Memories of you, remain, bright and forever incendiary! 3/22/2023

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Date: 3/26/2023 5:09:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts, Pangie:) you must miss him, but at least you have great memories together:)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/26/2023 9:39:00 AM
Joanna so glad you have emotional antennae)) That was so long ago. Memories are just that. Things of the past, I want to assure you, that I don’t live in the past. That LAST line underscores that point, Pangie xo
Date: 3/22/2023 1:28:00 PM
Your "RAINY SUMMER LOVE" is a wonderful write. Today, we had some rain. All I could think of was God was crying on this crazy world. He must be sad. Have a great/blessed day write away................
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Date: 3/22/2023 2:54:00 PM
God knows, Paula we are human.he also sees the evil ones. All minions of Satan.out to harm the innocent, from the unborn to the very old.any Poet out to stop other poets from reading us? What is this West Side Story! So childish. Report to Adnin. There is a troll on the comments board. No kidding,,,a total liar. Poets do mot care. They want a comment over a creep. Good lubk too them. Just be you. Pangie xo
Date: 3/22/2023 10:27:00 AM
Wow! Pangie this is stunning! A Fave for me! Such beautiful images throughout this gem. I'm honored that you would share your True Love on poetry soup. Eyes...eternally starry! My goodness this is Breathtaking! Love Chantelle xoxo
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Date: 3/22/2023 2:40:00 PM
Finally back online. Gosh, I am moved, Chantelle. These were not lines just slapped on.I had to relive those rain blessed kisses. I liked the last line most. I get worn out with lost love poetry.it happens to many. Grow up. There are plenty of dudes out there,.I like the sizzling memories best. Hugs for FAVING it. I plan to erase my faves of any here who hurt me…including tributes. Tired of being dismissed as insignificant as a dead fly. Foes..attn…do not mess with me. Pangie xo Pangie xo

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