Broken down car in a town about 600km from home one night with my girl, in the rain, no accommodation, it was beautiful. It was all so beautiful.
She kisses my shoulder As my fingers braise her hair. She smiles to my eyes And my mind begins to yell… Kiss her lips, Hug her hips, Become a light That glows tonight. Feel the bridge above Leading to a place of love That calls our names in this rain tonight.
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