Rainy Mist

Late In bed we laze
Misty rain falls many days….
Soft curls finger plays
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 4, 2010 at 11:06 AM
"Hah!" I say to anyone who thinks the haiku and senryu should not rhyme. Look at how well it reads when the rhyme is there! A lovely image of lovers enjoying a rainy morning, Robb. Best wishes, Carolyn
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