Rainy Fourth

RAINY FOURTH fireworks quenched by rain colorful bluster cooled off serene holiday 7/4/2017 haiku form

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Daniel Turner

Date: 7/5/2017 9:39:00 AM

If only! Sounds like a battlefield here. Nice write, Mrs Kim.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/4/2017 7:17:00 PM

Oh, if only it would rain. And hard. They started hours ago with the noise. I'm in a war zone.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2017 6:08:00 PM

Your response of, "Eeks!" had me ROFLMAO!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2017 8:12:00 PM

Eeks!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2017 3:22:00 PM

- Not exactly the same when it's raining - Great written - Happy day :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2017 3:28:00 PM

Thankfully saw some yesterday! :) Happy 4th to you!