Rainy Days

Stiff clouds swell over city
graying every muscle, brutal thunder voices
happy snails bother slippery walls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 20, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Interesting use of imagery and alliteration. Gives the reader something to ponder about. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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