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You can read into the title and the poem. Inspired by those items we buy and haven't used.

Rainy Day Blues

bricks spent in Spring a scant leftover azure blue surplus 6/5/2017 non-traditional haiku 4/5/5 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lawless Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Hey, Kim, I'm "that" neighbor who will "re-purpose" on purpose many of those items in your overstock.....nicely done
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 9:05 AM
I love that, John! I was contemplating those bricks. Nothing wrong with having unused things (not hording). I had a pretty wallet I had used only a little. It was a Ver Wang. I ended up giving it to my granddaughter for a homecoming dance. She loved and kept it. Yay to surplus :) Thanks, John!
Green Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Nicely done Kim. I am guilty of this often.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:58 AM
I think we all are. Thanks.
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