Rainy Day

Today i was in school it started to rain I felt like a fool but i finished my test without pain I saw a little cat chasing a little mouse which look like my cat whom is waiting at my house It started to rain I was alone missing my pet again waiting for me alone

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Athen Wong

Date: 6/11/2013 2:27:00 AM

hey guys I am Athen and thanks for supporting me I'm really happy, thanks for all your support see you soon.

Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 8:31:00 PM

ATHEN, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Athen Wong
Date: 6/11/2013 2:20:00 AM

thank you skat ^-^

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/8/2013 12:40:00 PM

Lol:) were you dreaming about your cat? You rime good dear. It's great to read your piece this evening Athen, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. It's a platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. There are lots of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke

Athen Wong
Date: 6/10/2013 12:55:00 AM

Thanks i really did my best.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2013 7:55:00 AM

Good Morning Athen Wong, a sad wait. hope your pet was happy once you got home. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2013 4:24:00 AM

Wong,a nice poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)