Rainy Day

Today i was in school
it started to rain
I felt like a fool
but i finished my test without pain

I saw a little cat
chasing a little mouse
which look like my cat
whom is waiting at my house

It started to rain
I was alone
missing my pet again
waiting for me alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Wong Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 2:27 AM
hey guys I am Athen and thanks for supporting me I'm really happy, thanks for all your support see you soon.
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June 10, 2013 at 8:31 PM
ATHEN, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
Wong Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 2:20 AM
thank you skat ^-^
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June 8, 2013 at 12:40 PM
Lol:) were you dreaming about your cat? You rime good dear. It's great to read your piece this evening Athen, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. It's a platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. There are lots of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke
Wong Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 12:55 AM
Thanks i really did my best.
A   Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 7:55 AM
Good Morning Athen Wong, a sad wait. hope your pet was happy once you got home. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda
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June 5, 2013 at 4:24 AM
Wong,a nice poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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