Rainy Dawn - Tb

On window pane
 Dawn brings rain, with
 A stain of gray 
 
 1-28-19
 Any Theme Than Bauk Contest
 Sponsor: Charles Messina
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Allison Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 3:42 PM
Lovely imagery Joseph many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Nicole Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 10:44 PM
Rain lingering on the window- as moments pause. I love this. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy
Y. Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 11:45 AM
Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Oh those gray days lol. Great write, Joseph. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Charlie
May Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Thank you for my placement Charles..
Devonshire Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 6:16 AM
A great description of a rainy morning, Joseph. Congratulations on your win in Charlie's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Oh excellent! xomo
Daniel Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:07 PM
A rainy day beautifully described, Joseph:) congratulations:)
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 2:46 PM
very well done, my friend!! i struggle so much with this crazy form!
Horsman Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:05 AM
I too love the imagery here, Joseph..
Y. Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Hi Joseph, You painted a lovely picture in a few words. Good job! I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 1:02 PM
Great image in a few words Joseph. Good luck. Tom.
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