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Raining Thoughts

The summer heat swells The brain trying to function Under the pressure Hands and feet are stiff Eeking words out of the air Seeking a release Sometimes thoughts rain down Interferring with our lives From out of the blue Furiously, we try To uncover the reasons For our despair Yet, there is real joy At finding a way through it A resolution, of sorts It is not high art Posterity will not claim The ramblings as good The human was here Raining thoughts, splashing around Trying to be heard Sharing the silence Reader and writer connect In the mist of life It has all been said In so many ways before Life is not exact The fact that we try Testifies that we were here Raining our own thoughts

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Date: 6/24/2010 11:15:00 AM
There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Karen. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 4:50:00 AM
Felt good to read this haiku!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 6/23/2010 5:41:00 PM
Nice expressions on raining thoughts
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Date: 6/23/2010 4:32:00 PM
Wow! I found your thoughts on rain very provoking, nice point on the ending Haiku. Enjoyed your haiku,..pd.
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