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Raining Tears

I'm raining tears 
Scared as a bat

I'm raining pearls 
tear is a threat

I'm failing here
with fear I've met

It's raining fears
raining fears fat




before summer 2016

Copyright © Weeping Willow | Year Posted 2016

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August 27, 2016 at 4:13 AM

Raining tears is not a deluge, so please remove your poem from my "A Deluge" contest, which, in any case asks for a new poem.

January 18, 2017 at 3:30 AM

A poetry deluge can be anything I feel I want it to be, actually. Power of poetry :)

October 23, 2016 at 7:00 AM

A deluge can never be tears, so it doesn't fit the contest.

August 27, 2016 at 6:44 AM

I do not take things that literally as this seems to be a poetry not literally soup :) I have removed, as you please.

August 15, 2016 at 5:33 PM

Congratulations on your win, I love the flow and so much said in a few lines ! Hug Eve

August 15, 2016 at 11:40 PM

Thanks! Never too many hugs ;D

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August 15, 2016 at 4:53 PM

WW, congrats on your top placement in the Rain contest with this wonderful poem. so much is said in such few words... :)-luloo

August 15, 2016 at 11:39 PM

Thank you! :D

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