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Raining Tears

I'm raining tears Scared as a bat I'm raining pearls tear is a threat I'm failing here with fear I've met It's raining fears raining fears fat before summer 2016

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Julia Ward

Date: 8/27/2016 4:13:00 AM

Raining tears is not a deluge, so please remove your poem from my "A Deluge" contest, which, in any case asks for a new poem.

Weeping Willow
Date: 1/18/2017 3:30:00 AM

A poetry deluge can be anything I feel I want it to be, actually. Power of poetry :)

Julia Ward
Date: 10/23/2016 7:00:00 AM

A deluge can never be tears, so it doesn't fit the contest.

Weeping Willow
Date: 8/27/2016 6:44:00 AM

I do not take things that literally as this seems to be a poetry not literally soup :) I have removed, as you please.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2016 5:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, I love the flow and so much said in a few lines ! Hug Eve

Weeping Willow
Date: 8/15/2016 11:40:00 PM

Thanks! Never too many hugs ;D

Lu Loo

Date: 8/15/2016 4:53:00 PM

WW, congrats on your top placement in the Rain contest with this wonderful poem. so much is said in such few words... :)-luloo

Weeping Willow
Date: 8/15/2016 11:39:00 PM

Thank you! :D