Raining Pain

Pain is like sweeping rain Dripping wet with gripping tenacity Beating down with fleeting intensity Drenching me wrenching my heart Whirring past stirring up emotions Pouring down flooring my soul Drizzling drops like sizzling fire Flooding fast with thudding force Streaming torrents like screaming pangs Aching all over breaking tide Clinging distress stinging my eyes Sticking agony pricking my being Falling sleets mauling my body Seeping in like creeping anguish Pain is like driving rain 11.08.2020
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Buhagiar Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 10:12 PM
You describe pain in great poetic tones. ~~
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Hello Jo Daniel, yes pain is like q driving rain. Enjoy your day my friend.
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November 8, 2020 at 7:15 AM
They say rain washes away your pain, but it is never that simple... pain effects people in so many different ways... Great poem Jo..
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