Raining Love- Tb

when true love rains, rose moon reigns~heart thrums strains in stars
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Miller Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Wonderful, a fine winner indeed
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:29 PM
Eloquently done, Ink Empress. A natural quality emanates a wispy decency of delight. This is a beautiful phrase that evokes a sense of wonder and joy. It’s poetic and has a whimsical quality to it. Much enjoyed, my friend. Aloha, William
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:27 PM
Colorful! Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:49 AM
So beautiful, Ink. Just love this :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs
Empress Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Thank u so much charles u are so generous and kind
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:14 PM
I like how well this one flows. I am reading ones that are stilted, but you did it perfectly.
Empress Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Ah that means alot , it was a bit tricky at first i had to do few of these and chose this one to enter for the contest. Thank u so much. Ah i saw ur ninette contest, i was just thinking yesterday its been a while since iv last written a ninette. Cant wait to try again. Sending you light always
Hind Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 9:40 AM
Very delicate and lovely, Ink. Always enjoy!
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Awwn thank you always kind soul
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Lovely write, so romantic with emotion, Ink. Good luck in the contest. Enjoyed reading my friend. Thank you for my win in your contest. Many blessings my friend
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Thank you so very much, means alot coming from a talented soul like you. Truly
Poet Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Your interpretation of the Than-Bauk is both exceptional and awe-inspiring. Despite its brevity, your poem encapsulates profound emotions. The utilization of imagery is impeccable, resulting in an uplifting piece. Your skillful execution, particularly in the wordplay of 'rains/reigns,' is truly commendable. BOL with the contest.
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Dear Sotto i truly appreciate your support always. Just found this form fun to do, cant wait to read yours. Thank you so much
Pandit Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 5:20 AM
when true love rains, rose moon reigns~ heart --how beautiful! Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem, Ink.
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Thank you so much always for being so supportive,,.. so grateful
Seeker Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Superbo!
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Thank you seeker
Puddifoot Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 2:47 AM
i'm not keen on these really short forms (i like to ramble!) but i think you've done an excellent job with this one - love the wordplay of 'rains/reigns' :)
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 10:27 PM
Me too haha but i feel like sometimes short poems help me keep things concise. Although i still prefer free verse. Thank you so much for your kind feedback
Sharma  Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 12:35 AM
Just so eloquently, gloriously and magically carrying your beautiful fragrance.. All these words summarise the essence of this poem, especially such a lovely take on the Than-Bauk form. I'm so intrigued to try this myself as well, looks very interesting! Wow.. The perfect rhyming within syllables and your word choices are beyond impeccable.. Love rains, moon reigns and those cosmic refrains! Gosh, I feel like swirling in the celestial enchantment of your unique wordsmithery, my dear Ink, wowwww
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 10:27 PM
Awwn thank you so much cant wait to read your take for this form too. Always grateful for your support
Buhagiar Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 12:14 AM
In sparse words, you convey great imagery. Well done. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Thank you so much Victor always
M  Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 11:31 PM
Awww simply lovely IE! Debx
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Awwn thank you so muchhh
Silence Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 10:39 PM
In just a few words, you manage to bring such beauty and power merged with delicacy..love rains and the moon reigns, bringing grace and divinity to love..love reigns above all, as sorrow and pain washes away..I’m so entranced with this exquisite piece, as it flows do magnificently! I’m so awestruck by you and your breathtakingly empowering poetry, my beautiful soul sis!
Empress Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Awwn my beautiful soul sis u always make me feel so good thank u so much truly for all ur kind and generous support
Onpaper Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 10:04 PM
when love rains, moon reigns… mmmmmm look at that opening line!!! It really does !!! Miss that feeling aee!! heart sings in cosmic refrains .. exactly… damn love and all it’s butterflies!!! Ok I shall go to the corner of this room n cry in my loneliness!!! Dnt have enough SPF aee … ran out !! So I shall dig a hole n wait!!
Onpaper Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 9:53 AM
I never left papiii!!!! This old man he plays one .. he plays Knick knack on my head!!!! I cannot aeee… XD .. u send me SPF 2000 aee.. brain cells dieing
Silence Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 10:40 PM
I’m dying!! My cocoa caffeine twinny! Absolutely agree! <3 :)
Empress Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 10:09 PM
Hahah i can send you spf papi! Awwn u left me in vain lol
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