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Raining in Summer

Unseasonal summer rains at once burst Everywhere litter and garbage dispersed Making men run here and there for shelter In no time, life becomes helter-skelter Unexpected like facing an old friend Heat waves turn into zephyrs in the end Enraptured by a great relief to hearts Pleasant weather diffused in many parts Unlucky for farmers who toiled year long Grains stay afloat; a heart rendering song In the wink of an eye, things go tumbled Happy dreams about their kindred crumbled Unkind like a bad master who reviles Vicious arrows of words for making trials With tongue lashing, makes the servants feel hurt As huge hailstones thudding down with a spurt Unfurls an eye feasting vibrant rainbow Cleans air and makes leaves look fresh and aglow Koel starts singing as if spring gets back A curtain raiser to ‘Fall’ next on track Place: 2nd

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Date: 6/10/2024 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Patri. Cheers.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/10/2024 8:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 6/6/2024 2:09:00 AM
Dear PVR, the raw reality of what so many face due to rain youv described in such eloquence! I love the depth of this poem and what youv conveyed in such a poetic manner with excellent diction and descriptive language! Especially the ending and farmers line really stood out for me! Thank you for contributing and for entering the contest. Congratulations on your win!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/7/2024 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments!

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