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Raining

A razor to the wrist A knife in my back A hole in my heart No going back A shot of whiskey A pop of the pills A foggy future Going over these rocky hills A confused mother A hurt father A sex addict daughter Too complicated to bother A choice from God A second chance A suicide attempt It almost worked...

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Skat A

Date: 2/10/2014 8:30:00 PM

oh my, Selena. where is your mind at. hopefully it is only a poem. better yet, I hope that character, has 9 lives. luv.... Skat

Darren Watson

Date: 2/9/2014 6:18:00 PM

In every dark alley Selena There is a shaft of light . Walk toward it my friend. A very powerful poem. Daz

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 2/9/2014 5:59:00 PM

*:*(* "I LOVE YOU" *)*:*

Johnny Rhinem
Date: 2/9/2014 9:28:00 PM

Its almost time to head back to the pave, after five days of mostly relaxation at room 132 *.* Anyway, it was wild poetically speaking for a day or two *.* Pounding down the brew just to get through another day in this wretched flesh that I always been....Nothing poetic, just a bag of words (*

Rex Mccoy

Date: 2/9/2014 5:51:00 PM

evokes a dark and shocking reality to the reader... thank god, this time and hopefully there's no do-overs