Raining

Raining
Third week now
Like stinging prison bars 
Someone is lost out there, I hear
Whimpers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gi-Sa Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 1:03 PM
So much in so little, how wonderful!
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Deep for a haiku
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 10:06 PM
AWesome!
Goff Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:16 PM
much said...jmg
Mehta Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 11:46 PM
Well penned Cinquain. enjoyed it
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