Raindrops On Roses

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*After smoking for nealy fifty years, I finally gave it up in May of 2024.

Leaning on a lampposts pole 
Cigarette in hand 
I only smoke when I'm down 
I'll smoke any brand 
Okay, this is it!  
No more cigarettes for me 
Time for me to quit!

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/18/2025 1:52:00 AM

Good thing, Charles. Cigarettes could be deadly.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/17/2025 1:19:00 PM

Good write, Charles. What worked? Patches? I was one of those stupid teenagers that stole her Mom's 'Taringtons' (rather fight than switch. Such enticing commercials when we were wee) and have struggled since. So glad you made it to the other side where you realize how much they truly stink and much else. APPLAUSE ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2025 12:51:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Thanks for your note. Glad you stopped. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away............

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/17/2025 10:30:00 AM

Hello Charles Messina, yes to quit smoking is a good idea. Enjoy your weekend. My friend. /Darlene/