John Lawless Poet Monoku

Raindrops - Not Quite Haiku

Raindrops, noisy little buggers
                                          ....ricochet off the windows


Raindrops, itinerant drummers
                                          .....searching for a beat


Raindrops gather, meander mob-like
                                                  ......through the streets


Puddles of predictability
                            raindrops repeat
                                                .......tapping points


Artistic raindrops
                    .....diamond studded
                                               .....spider webs


Freezing raindrops glaze
                                   ...........frosting snow


Raining cats and dogs
                            ........cold nose wet fur


John G. Lawless
2/16/2021

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Gershon Wolf February 18, 2021 at 9:09 PM These are really superb, John. Each one a gem. Brilliant! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2021 at 1:04 PM Not quite Ku but absolutely awesome to read! All those kinds of rain, very interestingly portrayed.

Regina Mcintosh February 17, 2021 at 4:32 AM Love this..love the rain. God bless you with many more... love and prayers, Gina John Lawless February 17, 2021 at 11:20 AM I know I haven't fully matured as I still think that puddles are for jumping in....