Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"raindrops Never Dry"

Raindrops like tears fall on my hand today..
Missing those gone by so here I lay...
My mind made up of parts of those in my life..
Changed this man from a boy who now sees bright..
Still miss them all with all my heart..
But now I must carry on and show a better start...
Memories that last like a river constantly flowing..
They lead to a lake of different signs without knowing..
Now my mind is a pool of so many lives...
So now I sit and write, and this is how I survive..

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Sara Kendrick January 8, 2011 at 5:15 AM It is good that you have good memories of those of your life who have gone on before but also I feel your sadness at their absence...Very expressive, emotive, and descriptive work..Your kind review of my work lightened my morn..Sara

James Peranteau May 25, 2010 at 6:14 AM ...and poetry truly fills the lonesome Michael ! Another beautiful poem ! Look forward to my frequent visits ! james

Lynette Chachere May 24, 2010 at 7:36 AM this is a beautiful poem.it's true, raindrops never dry. only mend.but are still kepy deep inside you, when it comes time to cry again. lovely. -Always&Forever Lynette

John Freeman May 23, 2010 at 7:10 PM Life can be such a mystery,Michael. And yes , indeed thoes gone by are sucha part of it. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2010 at 4:04 PM enjoyed M., a real nice poem you write and express the feelings of not giving up, well done with the survive ending,..p.d.