Raindrops Haiku

Sweat and tears that rise,
to the clouds above as mist,
fall to me again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Alex Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 4:11 AM
A very powerful haiku. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 9:33 AM
Creative lines penned for JCB Burl's poetry contest. Way to go and congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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