Raindrops Fall

fall raindrops fall

     on crunchy dry leaves

        ...  grey clouds scurry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Allen Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Yup that's Fall all right even here, we just don't get very much snow. You would never know that I am only one state away from Pennsylvania. As Haiku's are concerned I don't think they come any better than this.
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Very descriptive of this time of year..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the congratulatory comments..Sara
Wesley Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 8:27 AM
It's all happening here, lovely season to be enjoyed, rain and all. Enjoyed the different twist on both of these poems Francine. Luv Elizabeth
Sweetheart Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 6:49 PM
our exact weather today Francine ..not as lovely as your lines my friend.. grey thundering clouds and we are moving amid raindrops .. oh.. what a chore.. nicely done with visuals...luv..
Merryman Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Nice haiku, Francine. Kim
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