Raindrops Fall

fall raindrops fall on crunchy dry leaves ... grey clouds scurry

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/12/2012 3:03:00 PM

Yup that's Fall all right even here, we just don't get very much snow. You would never know that I am only one state away from Pennsylvania. As Haiku's are concerned I don't think they come any better than this.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2011 6:10:00 AM

Very descriptive of this time of year..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the congratulatory comments..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/22/2011 8:27:00 AM

It's all happening here, lovely season to be enjoyed, rain and all. Enjoyed the different twist on both of these poems Francine. Luv Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/21/2011 6:49:00 PM

our exact weather today Francine ..not as lovely as your lines my friend.. grey thundering clouds and we are moving amid raindrops .. oh.. what a chore.. nicely done with visuals...luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/21/2011 4:27:00 PM

Nice haiku, Francine. Kim