Raindrops and You

Droplets of rain softly fell on the field,
I stand under the roof's shield,
Waiting for you to make a move,
In the quietness, your words to prove.

The world is quiet, sky is grey,
In my heart, there's much to say.
Do you feel the way I do?

Each drop that falls, a gentle sign,
Wishing for you to look at mine.
In this rain, our hearts might find,
The courage to leave silence behind.

As the rain dances around us near,
It whispers to us clear.
In this moment, let feelings flow,
In the rain, love saplings will grow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Singh Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Thankyou so much <3
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