Raindrops

Raindrops
Trickling down, quaint
Window-panes a little wet
Swift steps homeward
There’s a shed, let’s stand under it
Raindrops
Enhanced 
Lashing your body
Sky turned hazy, treetops in enchanted dance
Lashing your body
An ethereal pair
Sharing a lone umbrella
Lashing your body
A little space; the girl at your side
A whiff of fragrance, her perfume
A hypnotising touch of her loose tresses
The space reduced, her man drawing her nearer to him
The space widened
Raindrops lashing your body

Raindrops 
Reducing with the implication of stopping altogether
The sky’s clear, the clouds dispersed
The road lies before you, 
The busy footsteps of ant- humanity
Raindrops

Now in your heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your very lovely winning poem.
Banerjee Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:21 AM
Thanks for the encouraging comment... Prasenjit
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:37 AM
- I enjoy reading your lovely and well written poem, Prasenjit ! - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest! - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Banerjee Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, thanks for your compliments. Prasenjit
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:27 AM
I enjoyed this romantic write, Prasenjit, congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:52 AM
wonderful imagery in this romantic write. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 3:30 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Prasenjit. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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