Raindrops

Rain, slowly falling
but while inside, pure, cold drops
bring to life the dusk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 4, 2013 at 6:06 AM
Nice use of similes and metaphors to create a lovely picture, Madaline
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