Raindrops

Delicate rain drops
Escaping from the storm's rage
Find freedom at last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 4, 2010 at 1:22 AM
Nice work, I loved the middle line...Raul
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November 25, 2009 at 5:32 AM
Nicely done Haiku with new thoughts on a rainstorm. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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