Raindrops

RAINDROPS
     
        Small
                  raindrops
                                 drizzling from           
                                                     cluster of cloud
                    holding deep dolor
                                                      releasing pain
                                  moistening
                   grass in
             
          mass.   

  08/06/2019
                  First Place

   'August Ninnette Poetry Contest' by  Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Hello Anisha Dutta, yes the raindrops do all these things.I like the sound of them hitting the roof and window pane. The sound is so relaxing. have a nice evening my friend.
Dutta Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Thanks n Blessing
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 3:43 PM
A very wonderous piece and applied artistry, a culmination of a righteous win--my compliments indeed, ~ Aloha always William
Dutta Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Thanks n Warm Wishes.
Gauthier Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Congrats on your top win, Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 1:28 PM
Thanks Line. Love
Callus Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 3:33 PM
A lovely, meaningful poem, Anisha. Congrats on your top win. Regards // paul
Dutta Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 1:33 AM
Thanks n best wishes.
Mitra Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Wow Congrats.. Such a sweet one
Dutta Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 12:54 AM
Thanks n Blessing
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Lovely! :))) xomo!
Dutta Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Maureen for visit n appreciation
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