Raindrops

Raindrops
soothing effects
falling, forming puddles
giving springtime blissful beauty
refreshed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 10:24 AM
I have enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this afternoon Alana. I hope you will always find the inspiration to continue your writing. Love, Carol
Thomas Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 4:24 AM
Rain is one of my favorite things in the world, and this cinquain captured it beautifully in just a few poetic words! Great poem!
Beer Avatar
June 10, 2008 at 7:30 PM
We have had lots puddles around here these past 4 weeks. I hope it keep up because I don't want to start watering the lawn. Your words are very refreshing my dear. God Bless, Cile
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