Raindrops

Raindrops hang on glass
suspended grey clouds weeping
fallen droplets fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Shepard Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 9:53 PM
I can see myself sitting by a window, watching the cloud-filled sky & the rainfall. I felt your poem.
One Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Is this Peter Duggan from OZ? Great imagery in your haiku... Welcome to poetry soup Peter..
Green Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Really nice my friend and wonderful to read you again
Duggan Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:02 AM
Thank you Chris, I'm working my way through a book teaching poetry to children. Have to start somewhere! You are very prolific and I feel very romantic. I can learn from you and the other members for sure.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:22 PM
You created the perfect image Peter, I had an advantage though living in the uk where we get more than our fair share of rain. Tom
Duggan Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Tom. I hope I can be inspired to write more from reading yours.
Gupta Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Beautiful ... Meaningful ...
Duggan Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Thank you. I'm 71 and started a 20 hour fasting diet my son introduced to me. The instructor said to practice meditation. This morning my meditation was on the rain. Then as I was meditating I thought of Haiku poetry and that is how it came about. Searching for Haiku inspiration I found this site. I'm glad you enjoyed it. You write lovely poetry. I have a lot to learn. Peter
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace