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Raindrops

Raindrops hang on glass
suspended grey clouds weeping
fallen droplets fall.

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Anna M Shepard

Date: 4/14/2018 9:53:00 PM

I can see myself sitting by a window, watching the cloud-filled sky & the rainfall. I felt your poem.

Silent One

Date: 4/4/2018 2:54:00 PM

Is this Peter Duggan from OZ? Great imagery in your haiku... Welcome to poetry soup Peter..

Chris Green

Date: 4/2/2018 5:36:00 PM

Really nice my friend and wonderful to read you again

Peter C Duggan
Date: 4/3/2018 3:02:00 AM

Thank you Chris, I'm working my way through a book teaching poetry to children. Have to start somewhere! You are very prolific and I feel very romantic. I can learn from you and the other members for sure.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/2/2018 1:22:00 PM

You created the perfect image Peter, I had an advantage though living in the uk where we get more than our fair share of rain. Tom

Peter C Duggan
Date: 4/2/2018 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Tom. I hope I can be inspired to write more from reading yours.

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/2/2018 8:10:00 AM

Beautiful ... Meaningful ...

Peter C Duggan
Date: 4/2/2018 9:45:00 AM

Thank you. I'm 71 and started a 20 hour fasting diet my son introduced to me. The instructor said to practice meditation. This morning my meditation was on the rain. Then as I was meditating I thought of Haiku poetry and that is how it came about. Searching for Haiku inspiration I found this site. I'm glad you enjoyed it. You write lovely poetry. I have a lot to learn. Peter

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