Raindrop

Raindrop
So simple, So brave
Coming from miles away
Unaware of being
Yet having vital meaning 
You fall today
So Simple
So Brave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 8, 2010 at 11:30 AM
hello Chris, I had to post my reporting live on the soup in to 2 halves, hope you read both. Have a wonderful day,..p.d.
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June 7, 2010 at 10:27 AM
My gosh, I already comment this one a lot. But yes that one took me the whole hour to put it together. I wanted to hide all the thoughts of perceptions in every other line. that is one the poems I will post today. nice to see you on line so early. Take care,..p.d.
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May 28, 2010 at 10:55 AM
I really like this actually. its simple in itself, but gives, hmm, whats the right word....it shows...characteristic of the raindrop...i suppose that word will have to work. ~Rain
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May 26, 2010 at 3:47 PM
just stoping by, to say hi! just here reading random poems. On any chosen old comments of mine. or just favorite poets,..p.d.
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May 25, 2010 at 7:32 PM
simple and brave, it rained here today in south Texas, got wet on my daily walk after work. The one i see them Cardinals in. lol, i thought i would make it. its a good thing i like and enjoy the rain like my Haiku. Thank you Chris for the comments on my poetry today,..p.d.
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May 17, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Very enjoyable read Chris. Love, Carol
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May 16, 2010 at 5:33 PM
We sure did. Thanks.
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May 16, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Great descriptive short write..We had some of those raindrops today...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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