Raindrop

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Infinitian

This form consists of eight lines of single syllable words reducing line by line from 8-1 (8/7/6/5/4/3/2/1) with an acrostic down the side.

Reach out and splash the face of God As you free fall from the clouds. In you quest to quench thirst. Nothing’s in your way, Dance, tumble, and Ride the wind. Own your Plunge!

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/20/2018 7:23:00 AM

Superbly done, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/20/2018 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/18/2018 5:49:00 PM

What a terrific answer to the task, Emile. Well done as usual!

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/19/2018 8:39:00 AM

Thanks Caren, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/18/2018 2:42:00 PM

I like...own your plunge!

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/18/2018 4:04:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I pleased you like it my friend, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2018 9:06:00 AM

Emile, the beauty, the essence of your brilliant poem takes my breath away. Superb imagery enlivens this exquisite piece about your determined raindrop. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/18/2018 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Susan, you've made my day my friend, Emile.