Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Verse

Rainclouds Gathered

Rainclouds gathered and
                           My dream drenched my lover's breasts
                                        She clasped me closer
                              As if the thunder of my kiss struck
                                           The wild forests
                         Fire touched the sky she cried in wonder
                                          Rain began to fall
                                       Till a lake was formed
                                        In her surf blue eyes
                                          I was deep asleep
                                        Thunder struck again
                               The rocks tumbled down the hills
                             Earth shook and shook his icy head
                           Like violent monsters in dancing spree
                             And suddenly all stopped wind lulled
                                     Elements were listening
                                     A distant ecstatic moan
                                 Slowly the moon rose in hope
                                   To shed rays on the waters
                               No ripples calm lake was laughing
                                          I was in deep sleep
                            The urchin crickets had the last laugh

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Laura Breidenthal February 1, 2015 at 8:45 PM This is a beautiful, descriptive write full of dreamy imagery...I like your ideas throughout... "Rain began to fall Till a lake was formed In her surf blue eyes" That's a memorable bit right there! Loved reading! Always, Laura Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 7, 2015 at 10:49 AM Love Laura. So sweet you are. rajat

Kp Nunez February 1, 2015 at 6:48 PM Hello Rajat, dropped by for a laugh, instead I was stupefied, this awesome piece that just, clutched at my gut, and held me aghast. My, how you write...enchanting, gripping...i was not disappointed, was greatly entertained. A 7, Kim ;) Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 7, 2015 at 10:51 AM Hi lovely Kim hahahah I am writing fun poems for you soon. So nice of you. God bless.

Dorian Petersen Potter February 1, 2015 at 12:07 PM Hello Rajat! Very nice pen Rajat! A 7 from me! Very romantic with some of your great humor into it, my dearest friend. lol :) Love 'n hugs! xxxxx D. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 7, 2015 at 10:54 AM D my sweetie. Thank you soooo much. Love. take care..rajat

Sara Kendrick February 1, 2015 at 6:14 AM Interesting work..Not sure the true interpertation of it but one can just guess..Very passionate but with a feeling of love lost..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 7, 2015 at 10:53 AM Lovely Sara. I have portrayed a dream sequence here. So..Your comments are a pleasure to me always. Love

Eve Roper January 30, 2015 at 11:11 AM Rajat, a 7 and a beautiful write. Dreams or our get away from life, not unless they are nightmares. Blessings Sir Eve Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 30, 2015 at 12:20 PM My sweet Eve YOU CAN> Your friend Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 30, 2015 at 11:15 AM Thank you Eve for your inspiring comments.Love to you and Sonny. Best wishes to your family.God bless all.Hope you are taking care of your health. Sonny is ok I think.Hugs! Your friend Rajat