Rainbows

Rays of colors burn so bright
After the storm has passed by.
Intensity captures a soul.
Nourishing from deep within.
Blossom as they grow.
Overwhelmed with joy.
Watching as they soar.
Smiling big for all to explore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Eastman Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 7:01 AM
I like how you did this. Great job.
Freeman Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 8:47 PM
Cool rainbows Acrostic, Cory. Thanks for your gracious comment. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:02 PM
Enjoyed reading this expressive and descriptive work..I especially like lines three and four..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Delacroix Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Awesome acrostic, Cory! Rainbows are beautiful! Just one little observation! Since your title has "Rainbows" in the plural, 5th line and 7th, the "it" should be "they". :) No biggie! Caroline. :)
Hunt Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Awesome Creativity Cory! R.M.
Devonshire Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Wow, what an uplifting description of the feelings we have when we see these gifts from heaven, Cory. Truly, a beautiful acrostic. And thanks for letting me know about the win with the eagle poem. I haven't seen the winners list yet, but will check it out now. Hope I can drum up some entries for my new contest, but there's no rush. Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 12:57 PM
a very creative and well done Acrostic. enjoyed reading it, love rainbows anyway, so made this one even more enjoyable.
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Thank you for sharing your special poetry with us today Cory. Have a wonderful weekend and may you find inspiration to continue your writing along the way. Love, Carol
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