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Rainbow Ride

A sky bridge
of reflective rain drops...
Crows glide under.

© Harry J Horsman  2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 3:24:00 AM

Hi HARRY..missing you... how about that rainbow ride. Hope your vacation is going well!!! have you in my thoughts today....xoxox pd

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/17/2012 12:35:00 PM

That is so cool! I happen upon a write of yours that had raindrops in them as well ;)! I really enjoyed this haiku-- it comes across as so alive for me, each line so vivid-- awesome way to describe a rainbow as "sky bridge". And Eep! *blush* my bad then? Heehee that's why it sort of caught me by surprise, I always thought you thought I was a girl-- but your comment in my "A Peek into my Shower" poem sort of threw me off, so I thought I should clarify..sorry about that & love back to you harry :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/16/2012 6:59:00 AM

I can hear the murmuring caw caw of the birds. Great. love, Kathy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2012 11:08:00 PM

Harry, i want to ride the rainbow... xox... always...~pd

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2012 2:05:00 PM

This is one of the best haiku I have read! PERFECT and all encompassing with such brevity and beauty! I adore it Harry.

Tanya Harrington

Date: 5/15/2012 1:26:00 PM

Oh, love it!

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 9:45:00 AM

beautiful simplicity in this form it is amazingly wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing this, I felt like I was there. :) Cindy Lu

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 9:44:00 AM

beautiful simplicity in this form it is amazingly wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing this, I felt like I was there. :) Cindy Lu

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/15/2012 6:52:00 AM

You are wild I imagine without me?!! hehe how are ya? enjoyed your haiku moment this am.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/15/2012 6:52:00 AM

You are wild I imagine without me?!! hehe how are ya? enjoyed your haiku moment this am.

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/14/2012 10:23:00 PM

Very nice Harry. Reminds me of the Thor movie.

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/14/2012 10:04:00 AM

Super write!!! 'arry!! Wonderful Haiku! you indeed have a gift!! Well Done...best wishes in the contest...big hugs, love ya , deb

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 5/14/2012 7:30:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments Harry sorry I am not reading and responding as often as I would like- many reasons and I just get to tired to write. I loved your rainbow bridge- love and blessings, Brenda : )