Rainbow Footle

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice F Poetry Contest

13 May 2025

storm gone dawn shone red flows grief knows gold light feels right green grows hope shows blue deep souls keep God's near no fear

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 5/17/2025 5:57:00 AM

So clever - well done, enjoyed immensely! Best wishes,,, Wen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2025 7:48:00 PM

Way to go with your footles. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/14/2025 10:53:00 AM

Congrats! Very nice!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/13/2025 11:16:00 AM

Hello JCB Brul, a wonderful poem. i love rainbows. My fav. /Darlene/ Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/13/2025 2:39:00 PM

Hello JCB, you are very welcome. Enjouy your evening my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/

JCB Brul
Date: 5/13/2025 2:29:00 PM

Hi Darlene. Thank you for the visit. And for the fave, it's an honour. ^__^

Ink Empress

Date: 5/13/2025 8:50:00 AM

Ah what a beautiful picture to go with you Very descriptive and rhythmic footle! I absolutely love the way youv written it and how it shows storm when gone and light fills the air! Beautiful spiritual ending to your well articulated lines dear JCB! Pleasure reading! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

JCB Brul
Date: 5/13/2025 8:59:00 AM

Thank you, Ink. You are a light that never dims.^__^