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For Brian Strand's Your Choice F Poetry Contest

13 May 2025

Rainbow Footle

storm gone
dawn shone

red flows
grief knows

gold light
feels right

green grows
hope shows

blue deep
souls keep

God's near
no fear
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Volumes Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 5:57 AM
So clever - well done, enjoyed immensely! Best wishes,,, Wen
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 7:48 PM
Way to go with your footles. Congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Congrats! Very nice!
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 11:16 AM
Hello JCB Brul, a wonderful poem. i love rainbows. My fav. /Darlene/ Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 2:39 PM
Hello JCB, you are very welcome. Enjouy your evening my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Brul Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 2:29 PM
Hi Darlene. Thank you for the visit. And for the fave, it's an honour. ^__^
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:50 AM
Ah what a beautiful picture to go with you Very descriptive and rhythmic footle! I absolutely love the way youv written it and how it shows storm when gone and light fills the air! Beautiful spiritual ending to your well articulated lines dear JCB! Pleasure reading! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
Brul Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:59 AM
Thank you, Ink. You are a light that never dims.^__^
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