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Rainbow Blind

Whenever my emotions are gathered pain side 
down, a smattering of silent, shallow, cobweb shadows 
wear me as woe’s weighty gown atop clouds blind 
to rainbows where naught is wrought but gloom’s 
sound, tempo fraught, inbound.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/8/2019 9:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win CayCay! I want to join in the celebration! Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2019 8:52:00 PM

another wow from me!! You made this short list. Wheeee. Let's celebrate!! I read it a second time and liked it better because I really focused on the despair in this one. LInes 2 and 3 are really well composed for imagery, sweet friend!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/30/2018 3:42:00 PM

Beautifully composed with your unique style CayCay! I loved it! Congratulations on your top win! : ) Happy New Year my friend! xxoo

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/19/2018 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this soulful write.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 4/18/2018 3:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, CayCay.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/17/2018 8:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, CayCay .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/17/2018 7:45:00 PM

Sadly beautiful, CayCay, and written with alliteration and rhymes too. Well done! Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2018 12:12:00 PM

- Best wishes and congratulations with your 2nd place in the contest, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2018 10:56:00 AM

beautifully penned CayCay love the use of alliteration and your imagery is packed with emotion:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/17/2018 10:21:00 AM

Congrats on your silver medal win, CayCay. Lovely.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/18/2018 10:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Line for sharing your energy and time with all us via contests! I appreciate you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2018 7:34:00 PM

Very nicely done. This one I really want to get around to as soon as possible!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2018 7:07:00 PM

Emotive! ...wears me as woe’s weighty gown!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/22/2018 3:10:00 PM

Snowball contest made for fun writes, didn't it? I admit I'd never heard of that form, that mine is totally made up - not depressed, but I've been there enough to write about it. Glad to have your response, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/21/2018 11:26:00 AM

incredible use of lyrical language, cay, from cobweb shadows to rainbows...wow!..huggs

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2018 2:44:00 PM

Thank you, Nette - I always love your comments, they are dear to me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/21/2018 3:52:00 AM

Your imagery, and romantic style is reminiscent of the greats, CayCay.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2018 8:08:00 AM

Such a lovely thing to say, Caren - I appreciate your words very much! All the best ... CayCay

Jacob Millar

Date: 3/20/2018 7:42:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, wonderful prose and a harrowing message of truth.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/20/2018 8:13:00 PM

Thank you, Jacob - I'm most glad to have your comments as my initial feedback. Poetry hugs ... CayCay