CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

Rainbow Blind

Whenever my emotions are gathered pain side 
down, a smattering of silent, shallow, cobweb shadows 
wear me as woe’s weighty gown atop clouds blind 
to rainbows where naught is wrought but gloom’s 
sound, tempo fraught, inbound. 

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Connie Marcum Wong May 8, 2019 at 9:16 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win CayCay! I want to join in the celebration! Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2019 at 8:52 PM another wow from me!! You made this short list. Wheeee. Let's celebrate!! I read it a second time and liked it better because I really focused on the despair in this one. LInes 2 and 3 are really well composed for imagery, sweet friend!

Connie Marcum Wong December 30, 2018 at 3:42 PM Beautifully composed with your unique style CayCay! I loved it! Congratulations on your top win! : ) Happy New Year my friend! xxoo

Susan Gentry April 19, 2018 at 10:40 AM Congratulations on your win with this soulful write.

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:44 AM Congratulations on your win, CayCay.

Eve Roper April 17, 2018 at 8:15 PM Congratulations on your win, CayCay .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Sandra Haight April 17, 2018 at 7:45 PM Sadly beautiful, CayCay, and written with alliteration and rhymes too. Well done! Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2018 at 12:12 PM - Best wishes and congratulations with your 2nd place in the contest, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison April 17, 2018 at 10:56 AM beautifully penned CayCay love the use of alliteration and your imagery is packed with emotion:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier April 17, 2018 at 10:21 AM Congrats on your silver medal win, CayCay. Lovely. CayCay Godwin April 18, 2018 at 10:02 AM Thank you so much Line for sharing your energy and time with all us via contests! I appreciate you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2018 at 7:34 PM Very nicely done. This one I really want to get around to as soon as possible!!

Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2018 at 7:07 PM Emotive! ...wears me as woe’s weighty gown! CayCay Godwin March 22, 2018 at 3:10 PM Snowball contest made for fun writes, didn't it? I admit I'd never heard of that form, that mine is totally made up - not depressed, but I've been there enough to write about it. Glad to have your response, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Nette Onclaud March 21, 2018 at 11:26 AM incredible use of lyrical language, cay, from cobweb shadows to rainbows...wow!..huggs CayCay Godwin March 21, 2018 at 2:44 PM Thank you, Nette - I always love your comments, they are dear to me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Caren Krutsinger March 21, 2018 at 3:52 AM Your imagery, and romantic style is reminiscent of the greats, CayCay. CayCay Godwin March 21, 2018 at 8:08 AM Such a lovely thing to say, Caren - I appreciate your words very much! All the best ... CayCay

Jacob Millar March 20, 2018 at 7:42 PM Beautiful imagery, wonderful prose and a harrowing message of truth. CayCay Godwin March 20, 2018 at 8:13 PM Thank you, Jacob - I'm most glad to have your comments as my initial feedback. Poetry hugs ... CayCay