Rainbow

Rainbow

Sky gets rare splendor 
May be  before a thunder 
Unresolved  wonder.


By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair
14 May 12
Contest: Carol Brown’s ‘haiku weekend’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Carrillo Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 4:59 AM
This is very, very nice. I like it. Thanks Lucilla
Chakrapany Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 1:10 AM
Nature is a treasure of unquestionable puzzles .you can present here one of them here with poetic beauty .nice haiku .thank you for sharing .jk
Onclaud Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 2:34 AM
heaps of cheers to you for the grreat win, jag... wonderful!..:) huggs!
A   Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Rainbow, i love it... a wondrous thought... Congratulations, with your ROYGBIV of beauty~ always*PD
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Nice one, and congrats on your win.
Song Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 3:11 PM
Power-packed rainbow haiku, friend. So pleased of this artistic creation of yours. You lit up the sky! :) Gwendolen
Brown Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win in my "Rainbow Haiku Weekend"contest Jag. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:11 AM
I love storms, they are exhilarating and never fail to amaze. You bring the storm to its rightful climax in unresolved wonder. A beauty for the contest, best wishes. Love the fact I can see you Jag, such a nice picture of you! :) Hugs, Lizzie
Song Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 10:47 PM
I seem to be hogging all the space beneath your poem...sorry...Just wanted to say thanks for helping me repair my rainbow! I added the ancient name of God given by the early Jews...It had 2 syll. Stay cool, friend! Drink lots of liquids! :) G.
Song Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 1:51 PM
Come and see my rainbow too....before the sun sets today!....hey, I wanted to see your drunken pen entry...I think I will miss that one...
Song Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 1:51 PM
Come and see my rainbow too....before the sun sets today!....hey, I wanted to see your drunken pen entry...I think I will miss that one...
Desai Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:11 AM
short and meaning fully so, nice to read
Song Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 7:20 AM
Hi Jaggy! A wonderment! Exciting display of colors! I sense a true winner here!. :) Gwendolen
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 10:20 AM
oh my, jag... much substance in few words.. here's a rainbow for you.. best wishes and huggs! :)
Williams Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 1:35 AM
Jag, great entree, good luck..David
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 11:50 PM
Very well done, wish you luck in contest. - oxox Anne-Lise
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