Rain With Fog

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Rain With Fog Drip, drip, dripping oak leaves like funnels Carry fog’s cool moisture downward to rest Caw, caw travels slowly does not scuttle Roosters seem assured by this heavy air test As their cock-a-doodle-dos carry from the hollow best

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Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2017 8:59:00 AM

This is a fascinating write my friend! I surely loved the way you wove the fog's moisture into the poem, throughout the crows and roosters, and influenced by the oak leaves! I really enjoyed reading your delightful piece this morning, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 10:29:00 AM

Russell, Just a few minutes out on the porch..It is getting later when the sun is rising and some days not quite as hot early in the morn so I am able to go out sometimes..Thanks for the visit..Sara..I might need to find me some more subject matter about which to write..

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/11/2017 2:27:00 AM

Excellent quintain. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 10:27:00 AM

Ravi, Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/10/2017 8:00:00 AM

Sounds heard loud and clear. Nice, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/14/2017 10:26:00 AM

Kim, Thank you for dropping by..I am glad that you chose this poem to read..Your presence is uplifting..Sara