Sara Kendrick Poet Quintain (English)

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Rain With Fog

Rain With Fog

Drip, drip, dripping oak leaves like funnels
Carry fog’s cool moisture downward to rest
Caw, caw travels slowly does not scuttle
Roosters seem assured by this heavy air test
As their cock-a-doodle-dos carry from the hollow best

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Howard Kerr May 14, 2026 at 12:13 AM Atmospheric picture a template for an equally marvellous and atmospheric poem. This is a credit to you, Sara Howard Sara Kendrick May 14, 2026 at 4:15 AM Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the uplifting review. Sara K.

Russell Sivey October 11, 2017 at 8:59 AM This is a fascinating write my friend! I surely loved the way you wove the fog's moisture into the poem, throughout the crows and roosters, and influenced by the oak leaves! I really enjoyed reading your delightful piece this morning, Great Work!! Sara Kendrick October 14, 2017 at 10:29 AM Russell, Just a few minutes out on the porch..It is getting later when the sun is rising and some days not quite as hot early in the morn so I am able to go out sometimes..Thanks for the visit..Sara..I might need to find me some more subject matter about which to write..

Ravi Sathasivam October 11, 2017 at 2:27 AM Excellent quintain. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Sara Kendrick October 14, 2017 at 10:27 AM Ravi, Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Kim Rodrigues October 10, 2017 at 8:00 AM Sounds heard loud and clear. Nice, Sara! Sara Kendrick October 14, 2017 at 10:26 AM Kim, Thank you for dropping by..I am glad that you chose this poem to read..Your presence is uplifting..Sara