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Rain Water

The unpainted house with a tin roof
Which leaked when it rained_well it poured
It's known tin is tin and not rustproof
Although rain on the roof played chords
The rain still with a tin roof_well it poured

That music on the tin roof pattered
Lulling to sleep the occupants
Whose dreams during rain were splattered 
Like splashing rain upon floors patterned
When it rained, the occupants were splattered

Spirits not dampened, entwined in love's strong chord
Even when the rain pitter-pattered
Warmth and love the home still could afford
That family remembers even though scattered
Entwined in love's strong chord even though scattered 

Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Contest: Manassian Quitain
Written: January 29, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Horne Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 4:17 PM
Michael needs to read this one - his roof is leaking, lol. beautiful warm-hearted write, my fruiend
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 12:16 PM
Rain patters love..love leaks when it rains. A very sweet poem. So lovely.So soothing. Say thanks to your pen Sara and to your tender soul. My fav.Love>rajat
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