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Rain on Tuesday

I awaken to shadows outside a soft patter the emerald lawn glistens a screen glows laptop on table waiting for a new poem the day begins with a whisper solitude's embrace with a whisper the day begins waiting for a new poem laptop on table a screen glows the emerald lawn glistens outside a soft patter I awaken to shadows

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/16/2024 11:18:00 AM

Mike, this is a beautiful description of the morning. Sounds like you get up early and are aware of everything! It's a simple subject, and you put it together with great symmetry!

Paige Hind

Date: 5/15/2024 9:08:00 PM

I liked the repetition of some of the lines, flowed well

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2024 5:27:00 PM

Ahhh another brilliant mirror type poem. Does this form have a special name?

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/14/2024 2:01:00 PM

A lovely welcome to a new day despite the rain. I like how you opened and closed your poem. Great imagery, Mike.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/14/2024 9:53:00 AM

I really love the softness of your poetry dear Mike, keep penning such beauties, I long to read :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/14/2024 9:34:00 AM

Mike, An excellent poem on the dawning of a new day, when one finds serenity and inspiration in solitude and waits for inspiration to strike. Thanks for your kind comment on my page.