Mike Bayles Poet Verse

Rain on Tuesday

I awaken to shadows
outside a soft patter
the emerald lawn glistens
a screen glows
laptop on table
waiting for a new poem
the day begins
with a whisper
solitude's embrace
with a whisper
the day begins
waiting for a new poem
laptop on table
a screen glows
the emerald lawn glistens
outside a soft patter
I awaken to shadows

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Duke Beaufort May 16, 2024 at 11:18 AM Mike, this is a beautiful description of the morning. Sounds like you get up early and are aware of everything! It's a simple subject, and you put it together with great symmetry!

Paige Hind May 15, 2024 at 9:08 PM I liked the repetition of some of the lines, flowed well

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2024 at 5:27 PM Ahhh another brilliant mirror type poem. Does this form have a special name?

Vijay Pandit May 14, 2024 at 2:01 PM A lovely welcome to a new day despite the rain. I like how you opened and closed your poem. Great imagery, Mike.

Mystic Rose Rose May 14, 2024 at 9:53 AM I really love the softness of your poetry dear Mike, keep penning such beauties, I long to read :)

Sotto Poet May 14, 2024 at 9:34 AM Mike, An excellent poem on the dawning of a new day, when one finds serenity and inspiration in solitude and waits for inspiration to strike. Thanks for your kind comment on my page.