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rain on the old roof

rain on the old roof
and endless rumbling thunder
~ some day afternoon



AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2025 at 6:43 PM
I remember rain beating against a tin roof sounding more like bullets being shot at the rooftop. ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
May 1, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Humm ~ maybe I need to rethink that one. Switching it right away, thanks ~
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