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RAIN

River dancers on the shingles
Attenuating rhythmic shifts
Icy shivery down neck tingles
Nuances of seasoned riffs


John G. Lawless
10/23/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tor Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Love the theme and the creative chosen words.
Nunez Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 9:15 PM
Love the imagery and the rhythmic beat. The 3rd line sensuality is tops!
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