Rain Lilies' Blossoms

rain lilies' blossoms dried, falling to the dry earth... rain clouds blow over
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Sara...absolutely stunning....
Loving Iii Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 3:55 PM
yes , the proper way is this. good work.
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 11:15 AM
ohhh, a a seamless flow and wonderful contrast -approach throughout this piece , sara... well done!..:) huggs
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 10:16 AM
This Haiku is awesome. I absolutely love the imagery. It puts my mind in peace!
Sivey Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 9:37 AM
You are expertly writing some very creative and inspiring Haiku my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have enthralled me by the splendor of this triumphant piece! What a lovely poem, Great work!!
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