Rain Lilies' Blossoms

rain lilies' blossoms dried, falling to the dry earth... rain clouds blow over

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Donna Jones

Date: 6/28/2013 6:01:00 PM

Sara...absolutely stunning....

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/27/2013 3:55:00 PM

yes , the proper way is this. good work.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2013 11:15:00 AM

ohhh, a a seamless flow and wonderful contrast -approach throughout this piece , sara... well done!..:) huggs

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/27/2013 10:16:00 AM

This Haiku is awesome. I absolutely love the imagery. It puts my mind in peace!

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/27/2013 9:37:00 AM

You are expertly writing some very creative and inspiring Haiku my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have enthralled me by the splendor of this triumphant piece! What a lovely poem, Great work!!